Today’s entry is not going to be a “Let’s Read” -- I am going to hopefully get back to that tomorrow, time and energy permitting.
Instead, what I’m going to do today is hit the “Pause” button on this fic, take some time to look over the analysis we’ve done so far, take the constraints and rules I discussed in past chapters, and put them to use to show how I
would have handled these chapters, were I writing them.
We will begin by recapping all the rules I bolded in the chapters past. And then--going from that list of rules--I’ll explain (and even show snippets of) how I’d write this.
Please keep in mind that these are NOT my attempt to formally re-write the entire fic. I am definitely interested in doing so, but the fact is, this is Pixelgoddess’s creation, and unless I have her explicit permission, I won’t be doing anything but this.
Let’s get started.( Collapse )
I have some work stuff tomorrow, so I might not post the next (few) chapter(s) until a few days from now. Hopefully I’ll see you guys sooner than that!